3 Act Structure

Act 1
     Stilettos clicking as she walked to her bank office, the quiet building breathing deeply around her.  That is, until a hand grabbed her, dragging her towards the safe.
     "Open it!" the man said.
     She typed the password, feeling a gun in her side.  She reached to push the silent alarm.

Act 2
     Her plans were spoiled as he tied her up and chucked her in a corner.  Three more men entered the safe, he wasn't alone.
     "Stay quiet and we'll spare you," the leader threatened as they began stuffing the money in bags.  His mask slipped.  She gasped and found the gun in her face.
    

Act 3
     "Can't let you live now you've seen my face!" the man laughed.
     The doors banged open.
     "Police!"
     Shots were fired.  She ducked, crying.
     "You're alright," a cop said.
     She looked up, "how?"
     "They tripped the silent alarm."......

     Click.  Her heels echoed in the silent building.  In her head she saw the bodies of four robbers.

Think Aloud- The Count of Monte Cristo 2

Text Connections-  Text-to-text  When Hannah, Chloe and I read about Noirtier building up Valentine's immunity to brucine we thought of Wesley in the Princess Bride.  Wesley, like Valentine, takes increasing amounts of a deadly poison each day until he is immune to that poison.

Text-to-self  After the Count finds out that Madame Villefort killed herself and her son he feels great remorse and wonders if he went to far.  I know what this feels like.  A couple of times after somebody has done something bad to me I have retaliated but instead of getting the revenge I wanted the other person would have their feelings hurt and I would feel awful.

Process-  I was confused on why, after he made her pretend she was dead, the Count waited a month to bring Valentine back.  I thought, after Madame Villefort was confronted with what she had done, the count would have Valentine back right away so that Maximillien didn't have to suffer for so long.  Hannah, Chloe and I talked about it and we came to a conclusion.  Hannah suggested:

Maybe the Count didn't bring Valentine back right away because there was something else that he needed to do first.  Or maybe it was a symbolic thing because it was similar to him giving Morrel three months to pay his debts.

Chloe was confused on whether the deaths of Barrois and Faria were related.  When Barrois was dying he went through three attacks, with the third one killing him.  Faria's disease caused him to go through three attacks over his life time, the third of which killed him.  Chloe said:

It could be a coincident, but I don't think it was because there aren't many coincidences in The Count of Monte Cristo.

Hannah and I disagreed, saying that:

Faria couldn't have been poisoned because he was in prison and his condition was a disease passed down through his family.  Besides, Faria's attacks were spread out by years, not minutes. 

Main Events-  A event that I think was big was the Caderousse's robbery attempt at the Count's house and the former's murder.  I thought this event was important because it tied together the Count, Caderousse and Benedetto (Andrea).  Because Andrea murders Caderousse and the Count knows it, he is turned in to the police, Eugenie Danglers carries out her plan to run away and Monsieur Danglers is publicly embarrassed because he is associated with a murder.

I also think that Fernand's hearing was a main event.  I think this because it is how the Count finally ruins Fernand.  Another reason I think the hearing was important was it tied Haydee into the story and gave her a reason to be there.  It isn't often that there is an extra character in The Count of Monte Cristo that isn't either a victim or a helper to the Count.  Haydee ends up being a helper.Fernands hearing and ruin results in his wife and son leaving him and the Count to be satisfied.

Think Aloud- The Count of Monte Cristo

Imagery/Sensory Details-  When I was reading about the setting of the carnival in Rome, Italy that the Count attended I thought of the huge crowds at the state fair and the smell of all the greasy food and sweat.  Another sensory detail that I thought of was when the Count, disguised as his dead friend, is thrown into the sea.  When I read this I could almost feel the slap as he hit the freezing cold water.

Text Connections-  Text to text: In the book Silas Marner, Marner is wrongly accused of stealing money from the church and banished.  This is like The Count of Monte Cristo because Dantes is wrongly accused of being a Bonapartist and sent to jail.
Text to world:  In The Count of Monte Cristo, Dantes is sent to jail.  Because of his long stay at jail, Dantes is a dynamic character.  When he escapes he doesn't know where all of the people he once knew are or what has happened to them.  This is similar to the lost boys of Sudan.  After the lost boys escaped from the government troops, they didn't know what had happened to their family's.


Points of Confusion-  One thing that I didn't understand was why Morrel felt like he had to kill himself when he couldn't pay his bills.  Morrel feels that killing himself would be more honorable than being in debt.  I don't agree with this.  In my opinion committing suicide is the more frowned upon idea.
I was also confused on the motivation behind Caderousse killing his wife.  I understand that he killed the jeweler so he could have both the diamond and the money from selling the diamond but I thought that killing his wife was for no reason.


Points of Understanding-  One thing that I understood about the first part of The Count of Monte Cristo is why Fernand and Danglars frame Dantes (though I don't respect it).  Fernand is envious of Dantes because Mercedes loves Dantes more than Fernand.  Danglars is envious of Dantes because Dantes was going to be made the captain of the Pharaon.  This envy caused conflict which lead them to get rid of Dantes as a sort of resolution.
A second thing that I understood was why Dantes wants to get revenge on the people that betrayed him. I think that most people in Dantes situation would want to get revenge as symbolism to overcoming and defeating the wrong that was inflicted on them.  It kind of creates a situational irony for the characters in the book because they think that Dantes is dead but now he is returning as the Count to get them.


Predictions-  One theme that I will remember from this book is to be careful who you trust.  Dantes trusts his "friends" and Villefort who end up betraying him.  Another thing that I will take away from The Count of Monte Cristo is that it is important to keep all the evidence in your case.  Villefort burns Dantes' letter that only Villefort and the reader know is addressed to his father, which is an example of dramatic irony.  If he hadn't done this the truth would have been known and he and Dantes may have had different fates.

Think Aloud on the Seven Deadly Sins

     Imagery/Sensory

When I think of envy I think of the metaphor green with envy.  

http://digitalart.org/art/41311/fantasy/seven-deadly-sins-envy/
Wrath is another way of saying anger.  I associate anger with the sounds of people fighting or arguing.
Hearts and Valentines Day have always reminded me of the sin lust.

     Text Connections
Text to Text- In the 10 Commandments there are two commandments that talk about lust and greed.  These commandments can easily relate to the Seven Deadly Sins.

 “You shall not commit adultery. 

“You shall not covet your neighbor's house; you shall not covet your neighbor's wife, nor his male servant, nor his female servant, nor his ox, nor his donkey, nor anything that is your neighbor's.”

Text to World- I think that the sin gluttony might be the most relevant to modern life.  As the diffusion of fast food has increased the number of overweight people has increased.  Because fast food is relatively cheap, many people consume it in excess amounts and throw any left overs away. http://blogs.smithsonianmag.com/food/2009/07/08/understanding-obesity-by-studying-culture/

     Points of Understanding
  Sloth was made a deadly sin because the Catholic Church believed that any kind of laziness would prevent a person from doing their church duties.  I agree with the Church that sloth should be on the sins list but for different reasons.  I think that sloth is an important sin to have on the list because if people are lazy they aren't helping their family or community, nor are they helping themselves in the long run.  I think this because if somebody is lazy how can they expect to be hired by an employer and support their family.
  I think wrath, or anger, is a good thing to have on the Seven Deadly Sins list because anger (in some cases) can lead to violence or murder, which are both illegal and very wrong.

     Points of Confusion
I don't understand why pride was made a deadly sin.  I agree that too much pride can come of as cocky and rude, even if one doesn't mean like that.  I think that it is important to have pride in ones own hard work because it helps you appreciate other's hard work.
Another thing that I don't get is why there are only seven deadly sins and why they are the ones that they are.  It seems like there should be more deadly sins than just seven.  I wonder why murder isn't a deadly sin because I consider it to be one of the worst things a person could do.

     Predictions
  I think that I will use this text to help me understand The Count of Monte Cristo.
  I don't think that I will come back to this text after The Count of Monte Cristo unless assigned to because I don't really identify with that type of thing in my life.  I feel that the sins are bad to commit, but I don't need them to tell me what is right and wrong, I can figure that out myself.

Reign of 100 Words

     If you have been wronged it is up to you to punish those responsible.  This statement relates to the actions of Odysseus and Telemachos against the suitors in The Odyssey.  Odysseus and Telemachos brutally murder the suitors of Penelope when Odysseus finally returns from Troy.  Odysseus is angry because the suitors have taken over his house and courted his wife.  Both he and his son Telemachos feel it is their job to rid the world of these particular men to set an example for others.
    I don't agree with the statement if you have been wronged it is up to you to punish those responsible.  I feel that if everybody abided by this rule then there would be a lot more violence.  It would be near to anarchy, people doing things to other people because they believe they have some sort of claim to do so.  Many people would abuse a rule like this, going as far as murder, like in The Odyssey.  You need only to look at crime shows where victims of a crime (or family members) take matters into their own hands by attacking or killing the suspect.  In turn they not only ruin their own life, but also their families lives.  I'm not saying the suspect/bully shouldn't be punished, they should, but fighting fire with fire isn't a good idea.

Comparing and Contrasting The Odyssey and O Brother Where Art Thou?

     The movie O Brother Where Art Thou? is an adaptation of The Odyssey by Homer.  O Brother Where Art Thou? was made in 2000 but takes place in the 1930s.  The Odyssey was first an oral story, passed down by word of mouth, until it was written down by Homer during the Greek rule.  Telemachos, in The Odyssey, and Everet's daughters, in O Brother have several similarities and differences.  These similarities and differences between the children of Odysseus and Everet in The Odyssey and O Brother are their encounters with their fathers, thinking their father is dead and their opinion of the suitor(s).
     In The Odyssey, Odysseus' son Telamachos has several instances that convey his character.  Telemachos  meets his father before his mother, Penelope, does.  The father and son reunion takes place in the home of the swine herder, Eumaos.  In The Odyssey, Telemachos believes that his father is dead because Odysseus hasn't returned from the Trojan war.  Telemachos tells Mentes, who is really Athena in disguise that his father is "...lost; he came to grief and perished,".  Telemachos also has a strong hatred for his mothers suitors.  He feels they are taking advantage of both his mother and himself.  He says that "they have an easy life, scot free, eating the livestock of another-".  These things show the feelings and experiences of Telemachos.
     The seven daughters of Everet in O Brother are similar and different to Telemachos in several ways.  Like Telemachos, Everet's daughters meet their father before their mother does.  But unlike the happy loving reunion of Odysseus and Telemachos, Everet's daughters aren't as loving to their father.  Also similarly to The Odyssey is Everet's daughters belief that their father has passed away.  After hugging their father they pull back saying that he can't be their daddy, their daddy "was ran over by a train."  Unlike Telemachos' opinion of his mother's suitors, Everet's daughters like their mother's suitor.  they share their mother's view that the suitor is "bonafide".
     The encounters with their fathers, thinking their father is dead and their opinions of the suitor(s) are the similarities and differences between the children of Odysseus and Everet in The Odyssey and O Brother Where Art Thou?  These similarities and differences, among others, lead the reader and viewer to whether or not O Brother is a faithful adaptation of The Odyssey.  O Brother Where Art Thou? is a faithful adaptation of The Odyssey because even though it changes some characters and the time and place of which the story happens, the main events are still present.

55 Fiction Revision

     My foot slammed into smooth ground, racing towards the crowded hall's end.  A line of turtle-like seniors blocked my path.  Ducking between two I continued.
     My brother blocked the way.
     "Don't!"
     Smack! he fell, I ran.  Wrong, but I had to know.  Rounding a corner, smell hitting my nose, I saw:  pizza for lunch!